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Sam | Could someone Critique My Website? ? |
my web site is www.SamsGifts4u.com, it does collectible sales an has a number of links to other sites people can visit.
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I have taken things off home page to making it look better. I do have someone helping to change the dark blue color to a lighter blue. the intro is shorter. the catalog image is linked to products page. |
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Nancy Allen
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Content is the king, work on your content. Try viral marketing techniques, where something just has to be shared with others. So one person sees something interesting and they share it with a couple friends. Those friends love it too, and share it with a few friends, who share it with a few friends and so on and so on. You can harness the power of viral marketing by adding a tell a friend script to your site. You can download one for free at SocialTwist.
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alc_
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Hi, from an SEO perspective.. (best address the typos and presentation issues first - like pixelated images, I noticed one or two).
1. Your tags appear standardised (same on every page), revise them to be specific and cover more keyword variations (but maintain your focus).
2. The search engines might not like your main menu.. java links - probably will be indexed but straight links are better.
3. I'm not sure whether I'd agree with all the keyword targets, for example:
BirdHouses.htm - Figurines? or models?
(Google keyword tool will suffice for research).
4. Depending how this site was made, I'd checkout uniquness issues as well (i.e. are the product descriptions or other elements copied from other sites, or from an 'off the peg' supplier?). At worst you'll need to re-write it or make substantial changes.
5. You'll obviously need to build links or promote it to get traffic, yahoo answers won't bring many buyers (that's not why people come here).
You could always benchmark (compare with) your competitors if you're not getting results.
Good luck! ;) |
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teresathegreat
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Yikes. Way too busy. You're overloading your audience with too much information all at once, and it's difficult to figure out where your site ends and where other advertising begins. Try sorting yoru ifnormation into a category tree - your front page should have just a four or five links (Contact Us, About Us, Products), instead of trying to link to every single product you have right away.
Also, poor spelling, grammar, and formatting makes a site look unprofessional and therefore unreliable. No matter how nice a product is, I wouldn't trust my money or my credit information to a person that can't spell. |
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Mary T
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You are selling some cool stuff but the site is making me dizzy! You need to "clean it up" a little bit and it will be more appealing to look at it then. |
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Michael
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First - the different shades of blue actually hurt my eyes, it was one hell of a strain to even try and read anything. The avatar (cartoon) instantly made it look like a cheap kids site.
You have WAY to many links on the left side bar, maybe if you could divide them up into groups ? ? ? that would help.
Think of it this way - when someone lands on you front page they decide in 8 seconds or less to stay or go away forever. I couldn't tell in 30 seconds what your site was even about.
If all this sounds a bit rough ..... I'd just like to point out you need to make some serious changes to have this site work for you. |
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Steve D
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Wow..way to busy...also, typos, poor grammar, and sometimes tough to read. If you want to come off as professional, you need to make sure that the site has no typos or misspellings, that your punctuation is correct and consistent, and that your grammar is good.
Chop down the navigation bars on the left - way too many. I clicked on one of the pics about halfway down - took me to a hip-hop video site - yet nothing on your page told me it would take me there - since I am not into hip-hop, normally I would just forget about your site since I would assume that it is all hip-hop. Put links to other sites somewhere besides your front page.
All-in-all - simplify the front page, try to get stuff away from "below the fold" (where the actual screen ends..folks hate to scroll). |
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Telling It Like It Is
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I have bought gifts from sites that elegantly present themselves with professionalism.
I don't think you should have those two buildings in steel blue as a banner. It looks very masculine. You should have your actual photo at the top, with a script font that says "Sams Gifts For You" with something subtle and feminine. Your photo should be at the left hand corner next to logo.
http://giftsforyounow.com/
look at this site - how welcoming and exciting it is. I also think your intro can be shorter and more to the point. Search for independent gift sites and get an idea of how to keep it short and simple but still look feminine. Good luck with your business! |
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Angel
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Your privacy page is not working.
You have typos on your About Us page and you have run on sentences there too.
The site doesn't look personalized. It looks like you bought into an online store with drop shipping capabilities.
Your SEO scores are adequate, for now.... but you are keyword stuffing, the SE will notice sooner or later.
Other than that I don't know exactly what you are wanting critiqued..... good luck! |
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radhe
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May be or Not |
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Ed Atun
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It is ok. Put in a link to Yahoo Answers just for fun.. |
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