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philena30

I made a new page for work at home today, could you tell me what you think?

Does it load ok? Any changes I may need.. before I change all my links to it.

http://www.moms.chooseyourhorizons.com/
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OK.. I made some changes.. Do you think the background needs to go?

xquizzyt1

Well, it's a little busy. A lot is going on. I see your creativity, but I think maybe you can streamline it and tailor it a little more. It's a bit jarring to the eye. I don't think that it is as "professional" and "serious" as you'd like it to be. The clouds and the bright colors definitely bring to mind children... and you're reaching out to mothers, so I get that... but I think if you're looking for solid business people who are looking to build a solid business... then your website should look more... buisness-like and not so much like... it's appealing to children.

I'm sorry!!! I don't mean to be harsh!!! You're brilliant to be able to put all of that together, it's great, but I just don't think it sends the "businesslike" message you want to send across.

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All professional websites use a white background. I like that you code your page with metatags. How new is this page? I see that it does not currently have any google pagerank. You need to get it listed on a bunch of search engines and directories. Here is a cheap one to start with: http://www.kahmer.com You'll find that most charge an annual fee while this is a lifetime listing. Goodluck!

zack

it loads ok and is rather well put together, but i'm not sure what you're selling

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Top logo brilliant. A lot of the rest of the page is just too busy.

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I get the clouds, it reminds us all of children but maybe a more faint color so it wont stand out as much as it does, its too bright.

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Your site needs to have less clutter in order to make it look more professional. You might want to space things apart more evenly and make the text on the side items a little bigger. If it is not too much work, I would reccommend you center the bottom paragraphs and pictures. Also, in your page title you need to capitalize Chicago.

poophead

it looks a little bit kiddish but overall its not bad, maybe make a few small changes...i didnt take a real close look so i couldnt tell you what to change...maybe the background, well good job anyways :S

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