Iunona C
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On home page change "What we promise" to "Our Promise" or "Our Promise To You".
O home page, "Hello and welcome to the website of TimeSaver Hull." delete "the website of"... unless Timesaver hull is a person.
On home page, "Please browse around the website using our navigation bar to the right and we hope to hear from you soon." should read, "Please browse our website using the navigation bar to the right. We hope to hear from you soon."
On Who We Are: .."children or just have a well deserve rest..." Typo, should read "just have a well-deserved rest."
On What We Offer: in the Table, make Service and Frequency bold. Also, change Frequency to "Frequency (times per week)" or ( x per week) or ( /week) or (per week) so you don't have to rewrite "times per week in every slot below that)
On What We Offer, House Cleaning should specify what you will and won't do, windows, dusting, mopping, vaccuming. (Consider if heavy lifting is included.)
On What we charge: change Introduction to Introductory. Also, "...you and them 1 weeks work for half price. Just a little way to say thank you." Should read, "... you and them one week's work for half (the) price as a way of saying "Thank you." In the table, make the top row and left column bold.
On what we promise: "We therefore have devised 5 things you can expect from us.:" delete the period before the : Also replace 5 with "five" and "things" with "elements" or "attributes" or something.
Looks like you ahve a pretty good site though. Keep up the good work. |
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Fat
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you need to change the font, it doenst look professional. Also add some pictures or symbols, it looks boring and like it was thrown together real fast. |
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xo_cuddly_kitten_xo
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needs more excitement |
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â–ºAurora Borealis
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It hasa good structure and the bare skeleton is all there.
You could work on making it seem more user-friendly and attractive to the eye. |
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Aaron
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The graphics aren't that well done, so that can be improved. I would like it if the colors were changed... maybe Green and White would be nice. Also, the text is a bit big. Maybe try to put more text on the pages as well. Maybe try to get the website professionally done and also maybe get a domain name. Hope that helped! |
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§eeker
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you need pictures or graphics or something. maybe more colors or a different font. im sorry but it's very dull. |
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sheilakel
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Put the job and cost on the same page. Sounds like a great idea to me. I wish you were in Alabama, I would definitely use you. |
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steve ze
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Yeah, it's alright. |
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E J
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It looks like a good start. Im not sure timesaverhull makes me think of,or is a word I would search for if looking for your type of services. But the site itself is O.K. |
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Summer D
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It looks professional and neat. Maybe aliitle more info on the opening page, but good over all |
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brutus
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It is original, good way to get ideas. |
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Fannie In Luv With Her Baby Girl
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Looks great, except those little thing I would adjust... but they really are "little" things :)
It doesnt "fit" in my screen (i'm widescreen) :(
By reducing it a little, it could fit into both a normal and a widescreen.
I love the gray on both sides, tho!!!
The "options" on the right should appear larger then the introduction text, and so should the "welcome"
colors are real neat;) layout looks professional
You could use a "clock" logo to reming the "time saver" :)
No need to sign "time saver hull" under the text, I think its repetitive |
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cam s
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CRAP!!! |
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Honey R
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its nice like borat |
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kellycooper2003
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sorry but grey is boring |
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insane clown posse
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I THINK IT IS GOOD THERE ARE MANY PROS AND CONS BUT TO NAME A COUPLE PROS IT IS EDUCASTIONAL YOU HAVE EXPIERENCED ANSWERS AND SOME SMART *** REMARKS THAT MAKE YOU LAUGH WHEN YOU NEED A GOOD LAUGH |
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