i need to pay a bill and i dont have a credit or checking. i have been asking my parents to write checks for me and paying them back or getting money orders. i'm at work and would like to get ...
OUR TRAILOR IS A SMALL THING we tow rubbish in to take it to the tip. like tree clippings and ect. A CARAVAN IS A HOME ON WHEELS wich is your your trailor.
so what do you call our trailor that ...
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P4piper
What do youthink about this poem?
The world has change today there's nothing left to see. i see the beautiful ocean sea, but do i really see the ocean sea. not everyday like most people who live by the ocean rocks. then i see myself standing there when opportunity knocks. sitting by the oceans bed as i lay me down to sleep. but did i just hear what sounding like a sheep. i am cold no with the ocean all around. i really can't sleep lying on the ground. now the lord is watching over as i close my eyes. bringing back memories that fade away and die. now the star light up the sky. my eyes following themoonlight. the darkness is closing around me and now i am afriad.
It's very well written but really sad. Hope you feel better now.
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this is like american idol. i am a juge hehe. love it i know you would pass on a poem contast. atleast simon is not a juge. bye:):):):):):)
mrscmmckim
It has no cadence and some of the words are not written properly. You can change both of those things and the poem would be ok.
gscualo
I'm sorry ...not in the mood
~*Godzgirl*~
i love it! very sweet
anti_lak3r
its good
annainhawaii
It was nice and pleasent
seta_soujiro84
it's nice.
faynilla
Its a bit.. blah. nice i guess, but the sea, see part threw me off at first and then the part where it doesnt make since at all threw me off the rest, but i am no literary critic. I suggest getting a book that helps structure poems and read a few other poets choice books. they can be very enlightening.
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